Thanks man,
I actually wrote 20 or 30 poems like this in Hebrew last year(Obviously couldn't Post THEM).
But It Took me a while before I could express myself fully in English in means of poetry.
U C , English is NOT my Mother Tongue, Though I speak, Read and write this Language very well,
for a non English Dude.
anyway, thnks again for the Feedback.
Cheers...
and may you reign like the Olive Tree, which is Long living, and Grow Higher and Higher,
and may the Lumber Jack never come near you
