VERY impressive seamus. I like a lot. Reminds of something I wrote...but not as good as yours:

A GAP IN A DREAM

Welcome to the world
I have created for man
You're not supposed to be here
But I guess you can
Take a look around you
Can you feel the quietness
Don't feel alone embrace
The feeling that you're home

A gap, In a Dream,
Is where you came from,
You're going back,
A gap, In a Dream,
Is Where you came from.

Lady mist is calling home,
The coldness in your soul,
And now you're free to be,
As free as you were meant to be,
Wander through my world,
That seems to float apon the sky,
I know you're not afraid,
'Cause this is what you are

A gap, In a Dream,
Is Where you came from,
You're going back,
A gap, in a Dream,
Is where you came from

Now it's time You went back through,
The gap that's in your dream,
You'll never see or be,
Inside this perfect world again,
I will not forget you,
Or your footprints on my world,
Just as you will not forget me,
Or the hole now in your soul

I gap, In a Dream,
I where you came from,
A gap, In a Dream,
Is where you came from



Inspired by a dream I had a long long time ago.

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Can talk about wrong and right.
Of those that are forced to choose,
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