No criticism here!

Very nice work. I enjoyed how the rhythm of the poem was sustained so well.

I particularly liked this verse myself:

the rain will fall
the floods will come
the clouds’ dark shawl
will veil the sun

Keep writing!

__________________
Tuesday afternoon
I'm just beginning to see, now I'm on my way
It doesn't matter to me, chasing the clouds away
Something calls to me
The trees are drawing me near, I've got to find out why
Those gentle voices I hear, explain it all with a sigh