well i finally decided to post a few of my little ditties... comments and critisism welcome as i enjoy writing...

the forlorn mountains
- grey and cold
towering from
- stone so old
remind me
- of my insignificance
test my resolve
- as i search for bliss
shrouded in wetness
- whispering silver
breathes in sorrow
- a message to deliver
speaks to me of things
- long past
and dares me, beckoning
- to ask
i stare silently
- and wonder
my mind is tugged
- to the ocean under
cool and deep
- my soul rests at last
finally my worries sleep
- i end the fast
up i splash
- blue joy abound
my path through the sky
- to the sun ive found
now far below
- the stolid mountains stand
as long as im here
- ill enjoy this land