I see lots of creativity in this realm. lots of views, very little feedback. my suggestion: if you read it, tell us what you think; even if you feel insulted, or even robbed of your precious time, give us a clue...a thought...cold spite or sharp, bloody knife...just a whim. you read it, say something. booh. hiss. blah. don't be a squidward. "i order the food, you cook the food, i serve the food. we do that for forty years and then we die" tell me if i'm a bore. and maybe then tell me why. good poetry is just a collection of words and language that transcends the literal world of redundancy and somehow, subtly grasps your soul, creating a personally idiosyncratic image, unique to each reader's perception. poor poetry could be forced rhymes or some weak attempt to mirror the images of someone else we hold in high regard. tell me. wots ah the deal.

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inside me I feel alone and unreal