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Old 03-25-2005, 09:45 PM
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Re: New Experimental Project!!!!

Ya i dont really wanna judge you much because i made this set of following guitar riffs that sound somewhat close to any color you like,(but eh, it came from me, so i dont care). Anyway yes the heart beat has clearly become a significant representation of one of floyd many experimental samples. For the warning moon song, eh it was too repetitive. Same sorry to say this, but stupid riff over and over and over again. it was good you piled some stuff on top of it, if u didnt i would of broken my speakers just to not hear it. as for oblivion, if u had some drums in there, it would sound much better. as for the main rythm riff, it was alright. i liked the strumming for the rythm riff. dampening is always a good idea . and the soloing on top was eh. i liked the idea you decided to mess with this really really fuzzy distortion. but the soloing had to many metal characteristics for me. needed some variation. overall your first song sorry to say sucked. you second song had some ok things hear and there, but even this song wasnt too good imho. keep working on it, and get band members trust me youd be much better in groupwork, and if u cant find members at least find a drummer, or a drum machine, your music really needs drumming. sorry to have to judge like this. but eh. people dont exactly go easy with their judging on me.