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Old 05-24-2006, 01:44 PM
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Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Driven
What did you say
When the Towers of Trade
Were torn from their place
in the sky?
And What did you say
When the bodies Rained down
And they Traded
In sorrow and Pain?

What are we going to do now?
How do we forget our anger and grow?
Tell me and then we'll both know.

What did you do
When you finally knew
Your first Love was only
A dream?
And what did you do
When they revealed to you
That your second and third ones
Were too?

What did you tell yourself then?
How did you know you might still find a gem?
Tell me 'cause I want one too.

Work in progress.....

oh my god! You are a lyrical genius! That was better than one of my dad's poems and he is awesome! I'll give you a little taste of one of my dad's:

Bellow out the blues
it's all for you
kicked all around, not a friend in town
walk on by, don't hold the door
you're not a friend, a friend would do more...

Continued..

Anyways, that's the jist of it all!
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