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Old 04-20-2008, 02:37 AM
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Re: A little more than just lyrics

First song starts off sounding like Floyd and then Mars Volta. After that the vocals are mixed too loud and sound a little like weird Al. Take the vocals down a bit and add reverb and it might have a nicer effect. I dig the instrumental sections. The chord progression really reminds me of the mars volta but that's alright. The guitar should have more mids and lows. It's a little thin. I like the noisy stuff at the end. That's one of those things I've always been a fan of (things breaking down and falling apart).

That's what I think of the first song. I'll listen to more and get back with you. Sounds good so far. Good work.

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