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| "Nothing I Can Say" And there is nothing I can say You will just turn and walk away Is there a fire in your mind As you decide to leave our love behind? And there is nothing I can say And it's always been this way And you can chose not to look me in the eye Only your lies won't work this time Swallowing my pride, as I realise This is it for you and I And now I can't fight back the tears inside For you'd rather be left alone with your thoughts in the sky You'll never change, no never change And I'm feeling like you just tore out my heart Thinking you don't need anybody, not even those you love Strangers in the end as in the start And there is nothing I can say And what we had has faded into the past And I hope you find whatever ever it is you need In the end it will be a hollow victory ------------- Inspired by the song "Near the End" by David Gilmour. The structure is almost identical to the structure of his lyrics, but the meaning is a little bit different. Comments, abuse? |
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#2
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| I hope you're feeling OK...seems like a rough experience there. |
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#3
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| yeeeeeeeeeeeeeikes |
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#4
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| Oh yes, I'm fine |
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#5
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| Visier - That touched me... |
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#6
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| Have you considered using enjambment? Might make some of your line breaks more powerful. |