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Old 10-06-2002, 09:32 AM
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"Nothing I Can Say"


And there is nothing I can say
You will just turn and walk away
Is there a fire in your mind
As you decide to leave our love behind?

And there is nothing I can say
And it's always been this way
And you can chose not to look me in the eye
Only your lies won't work this time

Swallowing my pride, as I realise
This is it for you and I
And now I can't fight back the tears inside
For you'd rather be left alone with your thoughts in the sky
You'll never change, no never change
And I'm feeling like you just tore out my heart
Thinking you don't need anybody, not even those you love
Strangers in the end as in the start

And there is nothing I can say
And what we had has faded into the past
And I hope you find whatever ever it is you need
In the end it will be a hollow victory


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Inspired by the song "Near the End" by David Gilmour. The structure is almost identical to the structure of his lyrics, but the meaning is a little bit different. Comments, abuse?
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Old 10-06-2002, 11:36 AM
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Re: "Nothing I Can Say"

I hope you're feeling OK...seems like a rough experience there.
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Re: "Nothing I Can Say"

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeikes
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Re: "Nothing I Can Say"

Oh yes, I'm fine . It's not based on an experience I've ever had - I haven't had any breakups that have been that bad!
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Visier - That touched me...
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Have you considered using enjambment? Might make some of your line breaks more powerful.
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