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Old 10-11-2002, 11:13 AM
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days of our innocence


Looking back in desperation to the days of our innocence
The things we didn't know made us wonder why
Sunset never darkened our spirits high
Sunrise lit us up inside

Recalling the sound moments of the past
All we can do is wish
To be the hero, to play the game
Wanting to live dreams now declared certifiably insane

We could turn it all around one day
We don't have to sit around all day

Run like your life depended on it
Seeking, nothing we shall find
Walk down to the park where we used to play with glee
It's not the same as it used to be

Why can't we turn back the hands of time?
Why can't we stay eternally child?


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I know this poem sucks, but oh well. Inspired by "Remember a Day".
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Old 10-27-2002, 01:44 AM
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It doesn't suck at all. Quite nice actually.

I've written a poem along similar lines but I can't remember exactly how it went. I'll have a look for it in the next day or two.
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Old 10-27-2002, 02:10 AM
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Obviously you wouldn't post it on the FORUM if you really thought it sucked

I thought the poem was nice

btw
I'm living those days of innocence

Last edited by ODV2; 10-27-2002 at 02:13 AM.
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Old 10-27-2002, 10:21 AM
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All I can say is, I really identify.

Nicely written!
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