I'll be me

[SuperSloth03]

It seems like everything is over
now and forever, i think its dead
seems like we can never walk away
pasted together by something fake
a mental lock by your super natural way

and i guess ill plead for anything other than this
and i guess ill scream for something more than just sh*t
oh let me be in my own end yea

your friends all label me lier and a freak
you stirve for something more something special
well it isnt me
you say that time will heal the pain if i just learn to love
well im a mountain of shame agaisnt the wind
im winning today but ill for sure never win

and i guess ill live the rest of my days away yea
and i guess things could be worse than they seem yea
you think im everything but i could never be anything other than me


*this is currently being rewritten and worked on so any input on how to make it better is very well appreciated*

[In the Flesh?]

I think it's pretty good. I don't write song lyrics, I write poetry, and there's a big difference there so I don't have much constructive criticism (I don't have any criticism, then), but I definitely think you're on the right track!