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12-23-2002, 05:38 PM
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| I'll be me It seems like everything is over now and forever, i think its dead seems like we can never walk away pasted together by something fake a mental lock by your super natural way and i guess ill plead for anything other than this and i guess ill scream for something more than just sh*t oh let me be in my own end yea your friends all label me lier and a freak you stirve for something more something special well it isnt me you say that time will heal the pain if i just learn to love well im a mountain of shame agaisnt the wind im winning today but ill for sure never win and i guess ill live the rest of my days away yea and i guess things could be worse than they seem yea you think im everything but i could never be anything other than me *this is currently being rewritten and worked on so any input on how to make it better is very well appreciated*
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12-23-2002, 09:17 PM
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| Re: I'll be me I think it's pretty good. I don't write song lyrics, I write poetry, and there's a big difference there so I don't have much constructive criticism (I don't have any criticism, then), but I definitely think you're on the right track!
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