The Real Translation of Je Crois entendre encore

Hey All...i used a really cool translator thingy to get a pretty spot on translation of the song Dave sang on the Meltdown DVD.
the translation is as follows....

I believe to still hear,
Hide under the palm trees,
His tender and sound voice
Like a song of woodpigeon! O harms enchanteress!
Divine rapture!
O charming memory!
Insane intoxication!
soft dream!
In clearnesses of stars,
I still believe to see it,
Between opening his long veils
With the tepid winds of the evening!
O harms enchanteress! etc
Charming to remember!

Translators are notorious for being completely shite.

Here is my translation:

I believe to hear again Hides under the palm trees His voice to stretch and sonorous As a song of ramiers.

Oh night enchantress Divine rapture Oh to remember charming, Crazy drunkenness, soft reviews!

To the clartes of the etoiles I believe encor to see it entr'ouvrir its long sails To The winds tiedes in the
evening.

Oh night enchantress Divine rapture Oh to remember charming Crazy drunkenness, soft reviews!

Charming To Remember! Charming To Remember!

Almost got it guys

a few corrections:


I still believe I'm hearing
Hidden under the palm trees
Her tender and loud voice
Like a chant of wood pigeons

Oh enchanting night
Divine rapture
Oh charming memory
Crazy exhilaration, soft dream

In the light of the stars
I still believe I see her
Half opening her long veil
In the warm winds of the evening

Oh enchanting night
Divine rapture
Oh charming memory
Crazy exhilaration, soft dream

Charming Memory