one from me

[atimeb4]

Not exactly the best writer in the world, but this one was kind of inspired by RW's song, combined that with my life and this is what popped out..

through a window in the soul
I see things we all want to know
not far from thought
yet a eternity from life

an recollection from the past
a glance into the future
faith in the heart
hope without wants

needs without desires
passion without fire
love without discontent
joy and happiness at life's extent

everywhere I look it becomes clear
every time I stop, I see it everywhere
not in a sign, books, or papers
but in the faces of strangers

I see what I want, and what they need
I see all my dreams, and the dreams they had
I see my lost love, and the love they want
I see my pain, and the pain they carry

how can it be cured
how can we all know
when that person is front of us...
the one that matches our soul

in the form of art
in the form of song
we feel it in our hearts
we seek it all life long

I see it in the heart
I see it in the soul
I see it in the fabric of life
I see it in every strangers eyes

[Fulghum]

Very nice.....

[Tzvia_lovefloyd]

i like it. im a sucker for peotry or anything of the sort. but i dont like all that much, more the depressing deep kind of stuff. it has more meaning to me, its what i read when i was depressed and it just like helped some times

[atimeb4]

thank you both, it is always nice to get good comments . I dont read poetry much and on occasion I write it.. or try too

[fixxlevy]

No, that was really good man.

Thanks for putting it out there!

Mark

[uday bhanu]

i am with fixxlevy

[atimeb4]

thanks again maybe I will dig up a few more if anyone is interested.