Life In Four Walls

[RogerWatersGirl]

Okay, this is a poem of my life, being individual and different and being isolated from people at school and stuff...and it payed off because I now have my own band, I model and act and its just great....Here it is...

Forever I am alone
No one cares of my thoughts or feelings.

I walk as a haunting ghost,
With no one aware of my presence.
People around me talk amoung themselves,
Preocupied with thier own full lives.

No mind thinks of me, know one knows I'm alive.

Sitting contently in my four walls of my lonliness,
Which is my life,
Creativity over takes me,
And stabs me with a knife
To make me aware my isolation
Will make a treasure of my life.

I am youth and my gift of creativity and talent
Will grant a powerful future in comming time.

The ones I worry that are not aware of me
Will be green when I am exposed before the world.

My four walls of my present isolated life
Will cave in upon me
I will escape to a land of forever fulfilling life.


By: Samantha (me!)

Hope you all like this

[voodoo_misfit]

Wow, very very good.

[Not Now John]

Gerald?

[RogerWatersGirl]

Thanks guys for commenting... I just read it again, and, yeah, I'm really happy
with it!
I have so many poems, i've just been afraid to put them into the public eye.
My dad is a songwriter and has used many of my poems and songs for his music.

[GeraldTheMouse]

Originally posted by Not Now John
Gerald?

I already said I'm staying out.

[Vera]

Hi Samantha!

You are not the only one, who has those feelings.

We could found a club, but I think that it will be not so exclusive.

Ciao

[nutopia]

I think this work shows potential but your best is yet to come

[voodoo_misfit]

No offense, that sounded like something a past English teacher once told me.

[nutopia]

your English seems pretty good so maybe he/she was right

[voodoo_misfit]

Thanks and maybe they were after all.