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| a depressing yet uplifting poem heres another one 4 ya. "*Confusion*" if everything in the world changed in an instant if everything was obsolete and nonexistant if you ever find yourself sitting in a self hate decay if you've ever wondered why you have to stay but if you didnt know where to go surely someone else than god knows have you ever been so weak you couldnt speak or even think have you ever sat down and thought about it clearly have you sought revenge for whom gave you this feeling have you ever slept awake lingering on the thought do you think its a matter that needs to be fought do you ever want to know why you're here suddenly its becoming more clear and if the nerve in your brain disconnects and its something no one will recollect but if your mind should renew surely its the sane thing to do but if you didnt know where to go surely someone else than god knows have you ever had your mind boil in dismay but have you had someone tell you its okay do you ever wonder why we are here suddenly its becoming more clear so what did u think... love tori.
__________________ "Be who you are and do what you want, because those who mind don't matter and those that matter don't mind." My brain is fried that cant be good KID: Hi. MAN: Is that Charlie? KID: Yes MAN: Hello, Charlie. MAN: Great. |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem i dig. |
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__________________ they must've taken my marbles away |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem For some weird reason, I thought of Edgar Allen Poe while reading your poem. I guess the rhyme scheme of that and The Raven are similar, but your message is definitely optimistic. Magnifique! |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem tanky tanky
__________________ "Be who you are and do what you want, because those who mind don't matter and those that matter don't mind." My brain is fried that cant be good KID: Hi. MAN: Is that Charlie? KID: Yes MAN: Hello, Charlie. MAN: Great. |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem That was awesome. Definitely reflects on the subject. |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem pretty good. The rhyming scheme is a little corny and predictable, but it's still pretty good! |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem Good job!
__________________ fLOyDiAN |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem that really rings true, thank you. |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem yes, yes indeed. it's a dam good job.
__________________ "thought i oughta bare my naked feelings; thought i oughta tare the courtain down" |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem i loved it, i thought it was like really deep. im writing this short story for english and i need a poem for it, not to say its my own or anything, dont worry and i would defenitly use this but its a bit too long. sorry. its really great though. i love it.
__________________ ~Tzvia |
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| Re: a depressing yet uplifting poem very nice, i have a lot of almost deppessing poems myself, but i like yours very much
__________________ to let me in from the cold, turn my lead into gold 'cause there's chill wind blowing in my soul and I think I'm growing old |
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