All Pink Floyd Fan Network
Please subscribe: remove all advertisement & much more!
 

I got a little black book with my poems in...

Poems and Lyrics


Welcome to the All Pink Floyd Fan Network!
You are currently viewing our website as a guest. Guests receive only limited access to view most discussions and articles. By joining our free community you will have access to post topics, dowload attachments, communicate privately with other floydians (PM), respond to polls, and access many other special features, including the ability to disable the Pink Floyd store below, for faster navigating. Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please join our community today! If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.

Pink Floyd Store
PostersCDsVideosBooksT-Shirts
Pink Floyd - Echoes
Pink Floyd - Echoes
22 in x 35 in
Framed|Mounted

Other Side of Pink: Pink Floyd Tribute
CD
cover
In The Flesh Live 2000
DVD/VHS
cover
Roger Waters: Amused to Death
by Roger Waters
Pink Floyd - Man On Fire
Pink Floyd - Man On Fire
T-Shirt
[ More Posters ][ More CDs ] [ More Videos ][ More Books ][ More T-Shirts ]
Sales help support this website. Please Register free to remove this store.

Go Back   All Pink Floyd Fan Network > Forums > Fans ramblings & creations > Poems and Lyrics
User Name
Password
Register FAQ Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 05-28-2001, 10:44 PM
_archer's Avatar
_archer _archer is offline
Outside the Wall...
 
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Tel Aviv, Israel
Posts: 336
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

I thought I was sad, Until I was happy
I tought I was dead, turned out I was silly

I climbed out the hill
fell all of the stairs
everybody laughed
thought I was the jester

I thought I was down, Until I was up
I tought I was up, Until I fell Down
I Climbed all the stairs
and The eyes in my had Sees the world spins
around around

Words by Yoav wasserman - the archer
__________________
Emily Tries ,But Misunderstands,
But the Sun Is Eclipsed By the Moon!
So Shine On!
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #2  
Old 05-29-2001, 09:45 AM
eiderdown eiderdown is offline
Goodbye Blue Sky...
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: canada
Posts: 37
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Ya sound a bit like the fool on the hill.
I wish my part of the world had more hills.
__________________
alone in the clouds all blue
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 05-29-2001, 07:14 PM
Charade I Am Charade I Am is offline
Former mod
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: MI
Posts: 852
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Wot is this really the game?
You think i don't feel the shame?
...ya know that derives from this
cumpolsirary pain.

And i'll try and eat 'em alive
'cause i know why THEY thrive
To eliminate tho pride and ominous institutions
But i swear when i become learned i'll
set fire to these illusions
And sure enough i'll be alone
on the Path of Secondary Man.

Whatever other path is there?
__________________
Its Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuu!
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 05-31-2001, 11:32 PM
Radiochair's Avatar
Radiochair Radiochair is offline
PessimisticallyOptimistic
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: The deep recesses of the mind
Posts: 920
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Roses are red,
violets are blue,
sugar is sweet,
and so are you!

I think I've beaten everyone else so far for the best poem.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 06-03-2001, 09:48 PM
Charade I Am Charade I Am is offline
Former mod
 
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: MI
Posts: 852
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

This is for lyrics man! Just add to the lyrics
and keep it in spirit!
__________________
Its Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuu!
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 10-21-2001, 11:23 PM
Lucifer Sam Lucifer Sam is offline
A Great Day For Freedom...
 
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Canada
Posts: 121
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Witness the horror scene.
A child. Age was like twelve ot thirteen.
Didn't have the chance in life to follow dreams.
Went through lust, envy, hate, and hardness.
Why did life treat him like this.
Its called Betrayal.

Its called Betrayel.


__________________

"Live for today, gone tomorrow, that's me, HaHaHaaa!"
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 10-27-2001, 01:18 PM
FloydWright's Avatar
FloydWright FloydWright is offline
A Hope That Never Fades
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Mediterranean C
Posts: 2,618
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Lucifer Sam...that makes quite a point, what you've written. And to the _archer (though I don't believe I've seen him since I joined this board, unless it was once or twice at the beginning...where is he, anyway?), you certainly got this thread off to a wonderful start.
__________________
"And with these words I can see
Clear through the clouds that covered me
Just give it time then speak my name
Now we can hear ourselves again..."

WrightSatellite #1
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 12-13-2001, 12:21 PM
Driven's Avatar
Driven Driven is offline
The Scarecrow
 
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: N. Ireland
Posts: 3,118
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

What did you say
When the Towers of Trade
Were torn from their place
in the sky?
And What did you say
When the bodies Rained down
And they Traded
In sorrow and Pain?

What are we going to do now?
How do we forget our anger and grow?
Tell me and then we'll both know.

What did you do
When you finally knew
Your first Love was only
A dream?
And what did you do
When they revealed to you
That your second and third ones
Were too?

What did you tell yourself then?
How did you know you might still find a gem?
Tell me 'cause I want one too.

Work in progress.....
__________________
Only the very safe,
Can talk about wrong and right.
Of those that are forced to choose,
There's some who will choose to fight.
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 12-14-2001, 01:25 AM
_archer's Avatar
_archer _archer is offline
Outside the Wall...
 
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Tel Aviv, Israel
Posts: 336
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

And the planes in the sky
tore a hole in the heavens
Took a cracks in he sky
broke a crack in the towers
that fell like a tower of cards
and the people have died
their Spirits flown to the garden in Eden
were the rivers of tigris & Euphrates,
Kishon & Pishon,
Irrigated the fields of the people of the world
and a thousand angels cried
and a 100 Griffins wiped
till the tears of the angels turned into rain,
that filled the empty sea of Galilee- the Kineret,
with holy water - the water of life and true pain, that comes with LOVE, comes from the Heart.
__________________
Emily Tries ,But Misunderstands,
But the Sun Is Eclipsed By the Moon!
So Shine On!
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 12-14-2001, 12:03 PM
FloydWright's Avatar
FloydWright FloydWright is offline
A Hope That Never Fades
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Mediterranean C
Posts: 2,618
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

My God, archer, this is truly powerful writing. I'm afraid it is often difficult to express myself when I am talking about the work of others and how it affects me, but I will tell you this: Always keep writing poetry--you have the gift.
__________________
"And with these words I can see
Clear through the clouds that covered me
Just give it time then speak my name
Now we can hear ourselves again..."

WrightSatellite #1
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 12-15-2001, 02:03 AM
_archer's Avatar
_archer _archer is offline
Outside the Wall...
 
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Tel Aviv, Israel
Posts: 336
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

Thanks man,
I actually wrote 20 or 30 poems like this in Hebrew last year(Obviously couldn't Post THEM).
But It Took me a while before I could express myself fully in English in means of poetry.
U C , English is NOT my Mother Tongue, Though I speak, Read and write this Language very well,
for a non English Dude.

anyway, thnks again for the Feedback.

Cheers...

and may you reign like the Olive Tree, which is Long living, and Grow Higher and Higher,
and may the Lumber Jack never come near you
__________________
Emily Tries ,But Misunderstands,
But the Sun Is Eclipsed By the Moon!
So Shine On!
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 12-16-2001, 12:03 AM
FloydWright's Avatar
FloydWright FloydWright is offline
A Hope That Never Fades
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Mediterranean C
Posts: 2,618
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

But your mastery of English is quite amazing.

You are fluent in a language when you can express all of your day-to-day thoughts in it--but you have mastered a language when you can do all of this and also know how to do it beautifully.
__________________
"And with these words I can see
Clear through the clouds that covered me
Just give it time then speak my name
Now we can hear ourselves again..."

WrightSatellite #1
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 01-05-2002, 08:23 PM
Seamus Laughs's Avatar
Seamus Laughs Seamus Laughs is offline
have you got it yet?
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: See Saw Land, all the way...
Posts: 516
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

"JEWEL OF MOTHER QUEEN"

fortune of freaks
make me speak
walk to the river
get the point

tell a story
for you have mind to stay
let us hear your thought
turn on a light

jewel of a queen
what have i seen
i know what i mean
mother queen

streams of angel hair
running through streets like mist
serpentine dreams of you
mushroom green you see what i mean

jewel of a queen
what have you seen
you know what i mean
mother queen, keep me a dream

seas of green, you know what i mean.

_________________
Make your way to See-Saw Land...All the way.

__________________
"I open the door, to an empty room, then I forget."
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 01-05-2002, 08:30 PM
Seamus Laughs's Avatar
Seamus Laughs Seamus Laughs is offline
have you got it yet?
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: See Saw Land, all the way...
Posts: 516
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

"CLOUD AT MY HEELS"

glass ball
is it real
stepping stones
at my heel

breaking news
fuels the fire
in the cirrus
take you higher

son of jan
dont you know
chase a flower
steal the sun

find a hole
and bury a dream
crash a mirror
13 for me

in the cirrus
take you higher.

I wrote this poem and "Jewel of Mother Queen" in early Dec. '01 in a restuarant on a cold shady winter day. I had been up for hours writing songs and "like a fire I felt inspired". Hope you enjoy.
__________________
"I open the door, to an empty room, then I forget."
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 01-07-2002, 04:42 AM
Driven's Avatar
Driven Driven is offline
The Scarecrow
 
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: N. Ireland
Posts: 3,118
Re: I got a little black book with my poems in...

VERY impressive seamus. I like a lot. Reminds of something I wrote...but not as good as yours:

A GAP IN A DREAM

Welcome to the world
I have created for man
You're not supposed to be here
But I guess you can
Take a look around you
Can you feel the quietness
Don't feel alone embrace
The feeling that you're home

A gap, In a Dream,
Is where you came from,
You're going back,
A gap, In a Dream,
Is Where you came from.

Lady mist is calling home,
The coldness in your soul,
And now you're free to be,
As free as you were meant to be,
Wander through my world,
That seems to float apon the sky,
I know you're not afraid,
'Cause this is what you are

A gap, In a Dream,
Is Where you came from,
You're going back,
A gap, in a Dream,
Is where you came from

Now it's time You went back through,
The gap that's in your dream,
You'll never see or be,
Inside this perfect world again,
I will not forget you,
Or your footprints on my world,
Just as you will not forget me,
Or the hole now in your soul

I gap, In a Dream,
I where you came from,
A gap, In a Dream,
Is where you came from



Inspired by a dream I had a long long time ago.
__________________
Only the very safe,
Can talk about wrong and right.
Of those that are forced to choose,
There's some who will choose to fight.
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Similar Threads for I got a little black book with my poems in...
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
I've Got a Little Black Book with My Poems In! paran01dandr01d Welcome to the Machine! 20 07-30-2006 12:42 PM
I Like Black Sabbath lackasynapsis Music-related babbling... 42 04-25-2006 12:35 PM
Division Bell tab book.. DreamEFX General 4 01-11-2004 10:25 PM
DSOM Piano-Vocal-Guitar Book Question Home Again Music-related babbling... 1 01-03-2004 01:00 AM
My own little black book PeRCeiVe Poems and Lyrics 21 12-07-2001 05:53 PM


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 01:56 AM.


Powered by: vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 2.4.0
Copyright ©1995 - 2007, Paulo Renato Dallagnol.