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| I tought I was dead, turned out I was silly I climbed out the hill fell all of the stairs everybody laughed thought I was the jester I thought I was down, Until I was up I tought I was up, Until I fell Down I Climbed all the stairs and The eyes in my had Sees the world spins around around Words by Yoav wasserman - the archer |
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| Ya sound a bit like the fool on the hill. I wish my part of the world had more hills. |
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| Wot is this really the game? You think i don't feel the shame? ...ya know that derives from this cumpolsirary pain. And i'll try and eat 'em alive 'cause i know why THEY thrive To eliminate tho pride and ominous institutions But i swear when i become learned i'll set fire to these illusions And sure enough i'll be alone on the Path of Secondary Man. Whatever other path is there? |
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| Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you! I think I've beaten everyone else so far for the best poem. |
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| This is for lyrics man! Just add to the lyrics and keep it in spirit! |
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| Witness the horror scene. A child. Age was like twelve ot thirteen. Didn't have the chance in life to follow dreams. Went through lust, envy, hate, and hardness. Why did life treat him like this. Its called Betrayal. Its called Betrayel. |
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| Lucifer Sam...that makes quite a point, what you've written. And to the _archer (though I don't believe I've seen him since I joined this board, unless it was once or twice at the beginning...where is he, anyway?), you certainly got this thread off to a wonderful start. |
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| What did you say When the Towers of Trade Were torn from their place in the sky? And What did you say When the bodies Rained down And they Traded In sorrow and Pain? What are we going to do now? How do we forget our anger and grow? Tell me and then we'll both know. What did you do When you finally knew Your first Love was only A dream? And what did you do When they revealed to you That your second and third ones Were too? What did you tell yourself then? How did you know you might still find a gem? Tell me 'cause I want one too. Work in progress..... |
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| And the planes in the sky tore a hole in the heavens Took a cracks in he sky broke a crack in the towers that fell like a tower of cards and the people have died their Spirits flown to the garden in Eden were the rivers of tigris & Euphrates, Kishon & Pishon, Irrigated the fields of the people of the world and a thousand angels cried and a 100 Griffins wiped till the tears of the angels turned into rain, that filled the empty sea of Galilee- the Kineret, with holy water - the water of life and true pain, that comes with LOVE, comes from the Heart. |
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| My God, archer, this is truly powerful writing. I'm afraid it is often difficult to express myself when I am talking about the work of others and how it affects me, but I will tell you this: Always keep writing poetry--you have the gift. |
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| Thanks man, I actually wrote 20 or 30 poems like this in Hebrew last year(Obviously couldn't Post THEM). But It Took me a while before I could express myself fully in English in means of poetry. U C , English is NOT my Mother Tongue, Though I speak, Read and write this Language very well, for a non English Dude. anyway, thnks again for the Feedback. Cheers... and may you reign like the Olive Tree, which is Long living, and Grow Higher and Higher, and may the Lumber Jack never come near you ![]() |
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| But your mastery of English is quite amazing. You are fluent in a language when you can express all of your day-to-day thoughts in it--but you have mastered a language when you can do all of this and also know how to do it beautifully. |
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| "JEWEL OF MOTHER QUEEN" fortune of freaks make me speak walk to the river get the point tell a story for you have mind to stay let us hear your thought turn on a light jewel of a queen what have i seen i know what i mean mother queen streams of angel hair running through streets like mist serpentine dreams of you mushroom green you see what i mean jewel of a queen what have you seen you know what i mean mother queen, keep me a dream seas of green, you know what i mean. _________________ Make your way to See-Saw Land...All the way. |
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| "CLOUD AT MY HEELS" glass ball is it real stepping stones at my heel breaking news fuels the fire in the cirrus take you higher son of jan dont you know chase a flower steal the sun find a hole and bury a dream crash a mirror 13 for me in the cirrus take you higher. I wrote this poem and "Jewel of Mother Queen" in early Dec. '01 in a restuarant on a cold shady winter day. I had been up for hours writing songs and "like a fire I felt inspired". Hope you enjoy. |
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| VERY impressive seamus. I like a lot. Reminds of something I wrote...but not as good as yours: A GAP IN A DREAM Welcome to the world I have created for man You're not supposed to be here But I guess you can Take a look around you Can you feel the quietness Don't feel alone embrace The feeling that you're home A gap, In a Dream, Is where you came from, You're going back, A gap, In a Dream, Is Where you came from. Lady mist is calling home, The coldness in your soul, And now you're free to be, As free as you were meant to be, Wander through my world, That seems to float apon the sky, I know you're not afraid, 'Cause this is what you are A gap, In a Dream, Is Where you came from, You're going back, A gap, in a Dream, Is where you came from Now it's time You went back through, The gap that's in your dream, You'll never see or be, Inside this perfect world again, I will not forget you, Or your footprints on my world, Just as you will not forget me, Or the hole now in your soul I gap, In a Dream, I where you came from, A gap, In a Dream, Is where you came from Inspired by a dream I had a long long time ago. |
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