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Agreed, well done man, well done, i loved that story, yep read the whole thing too, lol, your school literary magazine better love that story too, if they dont their wacko lol. Btw ive been to that death ticker site before too, strange site.

that was really amazing. i read it twice. i also went to one of those sites or something and it said i'd die when i was like 40 cause of all the diseases that run in my family.
when do you find out about whether its in the magazine or not?

Hmm awsome story. Good on you, Icky.

I just got two questions:

1) Is Gerald really majoring in English?

2) What did the magazine think of your story?

I believe Gerry is an actual lit major, but I don't know for sure. My school put it in the literary magazine. It was just a small publication, I doubt more than a dozen people saw it, but it's at least something. Though, they put the second to last draft in and not the final one that I put on here. Ah well, such is life.

Thanks guys.

thats cool. you could probably have it published in one of those short story books, my friend did it.

my stepdad said that, too. but, him helping me edit it might have something to do with that. would be fun, no doubt.

yeah, like just for the satisfaction of knowing you were good enough to be published, but then you might feel rotten if it isnt published. we'll be here to back you up though, but im sure they would accept it