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Old 01-01-2004, 02:46 PM
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Dedicated To Syd

I wrote this in dedication to Syd. It is posted at Authorsden.com. I recieved alot of good reviews on this. Many Syd/Pink Floyd fans out in the writing world. Enjoy!

Syd Barrett

With a dark stare you see mad things
gazing into the dark globe
…without hope
emptying of thought and emotion

Your hair confused
sitting in a vacant room
listening to a distant chime
which doesn’t clang

A madcap of genius
a rarity of talent
Terrapin, Golden Hair, Octopus
meaningless chatter and gossip

The years have passed
a loss of time
your memory forgotten
as a life’s dream vanishes

But there are some
who read through the lines
able to follow your distant drum
unwilling to accept the obvious

Shine on, Syd
Shine on

Friday, November 14, 2003
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Old 03-31-2004, 05:11 AM
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Well written, very nice job!

Cheers to Syd, indeed.
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Old 06-11-2004, 10:46 AM
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very nice, i like the last stanza
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Old 06-26-2004, 09:36 PM
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Yeah, I like the end too. Brings about warm feelings. Cheers. Shine on, rock on, you crazy diamond.
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Old 06-27-2004, 09:20 PM
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very awesome
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Old 06-27-2004, 09:25 PM
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thats amazing...i write lots of Floyd and Syd related poetry...i should check out that website.
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Old 06-27-2004, 09:28 PM
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Sorry, the thing is, you don't know Syd. You should write about someone you know.
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Old 06-28-2004, 12:17 AM
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Buulshit.
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Old 07-21-2004, 09:08 PM
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Loved it!!!
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Old 07-21-2004, 09:09 PM
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Originally posted by Paranoid Android
Sorry, the thing is, you don't know Syd. You should write about someone you know.
what?! you can write aout whatever you feel.
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