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03-06-2004, 04:48 PM
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| Song I Wrote Evenin' ladies and gents. So, here's this song I wrote. I call it "Dead Sleep", or maybe "At my Worst". But here it is. Dead Sleep It's been too long Since I've had the hope I should I'd try to be happy in dreams If only I could My mouth and tongue are liars Don't need this broken pacifier You will sow what you reap Until I wake from this dead sleep I haven't had a chance At doing what I can't My head has been molded again My soul has been sold again My mouth and tongue are liars Don't need this broken pacifier You will sow what you reap Until I wake from this dead sleep What is wrong with me? I haven't slept for days My subconscience has been raped I'm in a cage, I'm in a cage My mouth and tongue are liars Don't need this broken pacifier You will sow what you reap Until I wake from this dead sleep When you hear this song on the radio in a few years, you will be freaked out and you will say "holy crap! He showed us that when it was a work in progress!". So there you go, tell me what you think.  |
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#2
03-06-2004, 05:28 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Quote:
i will print this page and will sell it a few 1000$ in a few years. fans of your futur super group will be willing to pay a lot for this! nice lyrics btw keep on writing
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03-06-2004, 06:21 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Thanks man! |
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03-06-2004, 07:40 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Simple, but nice. Reminds me of RHCP. |
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03-06-2004, 07:42 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote It's really good. I like it. 
__________________ fLOyDiAN |
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03-07-2004, 04:52 AM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Ditto. |
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03-11-2004, 11:47 AM
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| Re: Song I Wrote James is back! |
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03-12-2004, 05:49 AM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Nice poem, its really good. I like the way you repeat that stanza at the end again. The only thing I would comment on is that the stanzas dont seem to link. Aprt from that, it's awesome, keep on writing! 
__________________ “Look around, chose your own ground. High you live and high you fly. Smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry. All you touch and all you see, its all your life will ever be." |
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03-12-2004, 12:30 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Rabid, I'm glad you made a thread for us to post the songs we've written. After reading my poetry, I assume you were hoping I'd share a song or 2... I call this little ditty Love Before Death Every day, the same thing We take each other for granted Strangers all around us Do we love or just content I choose Love, I choose Love Why hate when we can love? Tomorrow we could be gone Why hate who could be gone Sidewalks, streets, busy lives Leaving, coming, back and forth Smiles are good, hugs are better Or perhaps a love letter? I choose Love, I choose Love Why hate when we can love? Tomorrow we could be gone Why hate who could be gone In the end does it matter? Ask yourself a thing or two What does a person do When whom you loves is dead and gone I choose Love, i choose Love Why hate when we can Love Tomorrow we could be gone Why hate who could be gone Thanks again for the support
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03-12-2004, 01:44 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote thats a great song, sounds to me like metallica or something.
__________________ "I'm lost at sea, dont bother me" "theirs more in a smile than in a hand" "And the sea, isn't green, and I love the qeen, and what exactly is a dream, and what exactly is a joke?" |
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03-12-2004, 03:37 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote actually this thread is for my song. |
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03-12-2004, 04:40 PM
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 Re: Song I Wrote Quote:
very true. its kind of the purpose of the thread really.
__________________ "I'm lost at sea, dont bother me" "theirs more in a smile than in a hand" "And the sea, isn't green, and I love the qeen, and what exactly is a dream, and what exactly is a joke?" |
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03-13-2004, 03:00 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote I think G/L's song sounds country. Like the Dixie Chicks or something. (that's not supposed to be an insult, btw...)
__________________ fLOyDiAN Last edited by floydphreak : 03-16-2004 at 04:43 PM. |
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03-13-2004, 03:18 PM
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| Re: Song I Wrote Quote:
Then it's a pretty useless thread. |
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