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06-10-2004, 09:16 PM
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| my first draft to a poem/song any color you like in spite, of any god your willing to fight, and die for to settle the score, its not enough they still want more, they fill the graves with the ones they save, and the ones that died are the ones that pave, the road on your way to the new church, where everyone supposed to end their search, greed and vanity create god's insanity hate and war only create more violence and destruction makes the machine function rise up and fight with peace our plight the only proof of war, is death and so much more, the only proof of peace, is life without a crease, created by death and fought with love, in the name of a god above, who'd only stop all war, to show there's nothing worth killing for, never fight for love with hate, love one another and peace will wait, forever an a day those that dont believe, until we restore the peace on one fine eve...
__________________ to let me in from the cold, turn my lead into gold 'cause there's chill wind blowing in my soul and I think I'm growing old Last edited by rcmno31 : 06-11-2004 at 10:04 AM.  |
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06-10-2004, 11:21 PM
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| Re: my first draft to a poem/song nice, very floyd inspired, huh? I really like the idea its a concept i've contemplated much about. ya get me itchin to hear it in a song!
__________________ Born on third thinks he gotta triple |
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06-10-2004, 11:35 PM
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| Re: my first draft to a poem/song Quote:
Hell yeah, amen to that couplet there. I like that. I could picture it being a Pink Floyd song -- which is definitely a compliment. Work with it, it's good stuff. BTW, thanks for replying on my poem thread. 
__________________ Tuesday afternoon I'm just beginning to see, now I'm on my way It doesn't matter to me, chasing the clouds away Something calls to me The trees are drawing me near, I've got to find out why Those gentle voices I hear, explain it all with a sigh |
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06-11-2004, 08:30 AM
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| Re: my first draft to a poem/song thank you both
__________________ to let me in from the cold, turn my lead into gold 'cause there's chill wind blowing in my soul and I think I'm growing old |
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