My Floyd Poem

Hi everyone ,i thought i'd rite a short poem about how much i love pink floyd,please tell me if its ok(im only a rookie haha)

These 2 short words 1 Pink 1 Floyd.
Make up one big band with one big stand.
Fan after fan, jam after jam.
All along they had a plan.
Without their main man they didn’t end up buried 6ft deep in rock'n'roll sand.
But more so grew more grand and grand.

From worms to pigs to dogs to sheep, they took one big gigantic leap,
To explore outer worlds of rock'n'roll.
They didn't get lost in the big black hole.

No mountain was too high nor too steep.
The band that sailed like a ships fleet.
The band we love to read about.

The band that’s made me feel apart.

It should be in poetry forum....

But it's nice enough. Welcome to the APPF network!