A poem/song that I have written.

Cold November

i awoke this morning, at a time i dont remember,
outside the rain was pouring, another cold november,
the hearts so cold, left it with the soul,
the mind so bold, now there's something i can control.

I'll live my life, with just this body and this mind,
I'll live it right, crawl inside this shell and unwind,
I'll live alone, no sense stirring up emotions,
I'll live at sea, drifting across the oceans.

Leave everything at home, and run away from nothing,
all of the love I've given and shown, has all been for something,
I've left a mark on all their souls, a little something to remember,
days that past, my dreams and goals, another cold november.

A darkness rose and the waters changed, there's a storm ahead,
I grab the sail neurotic and derranged, it's time for bed,
the solitude broke me, and sent me back to my soul,
my heart left dying and free, called me back to play my role.

my heart and soul, lay cold in my room,
rejoin them and become whole, assume my usual gloom,
she's so cold I wished she could see, all the days that i remember,
days that I felt so pure and free, all in that cold november.


Please comment/let me know what ya think. I've been looking for some feedback and no one really comments on anything I've written.

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to let me in from the cold, turn my lead into gold
'cause there's chill wind blowing in my soul and I think I'm growing old