mortality

mortality
can only exist
in those that
fear.
death,
loneliness,
cold dark places,
or
churches.
when the few
fearless
fall dead,
those that
notice
perpetuate
their mortality
and the fearless few
live forever.

wow.

deep...

Very good...I like it because I really agree with the concept. I also like how it's short but sweet; eliquent, but not wordy.

Well done!

thanks. give birth to a smile!