Imagine Echoes

I just wrote this cause I'm having a bad week, it's inspired completely by imagine by john lennon, but I sing it to myself as the begginning to echoes,"overheard the albatross..." that very first part.

Dancing through a purple sky these red clouds float above us all
And rising to this spoke of place
Where peace is found upon one face
Imagine what this world would be
Picture all the wars cease replaced with peace

It's just a start but what do you think?

It's a good start.

Like a bitter chardonnay, I found it revolting yet pungent...


Loath me fear me until you die
I can loath you and not even try
Together we are for better or worse
Do what you want with this verse

Home we go there we stay
I cringe for that day
Loath me fear me until I die
You're just one big fat lie

I hope that captures the true essence of a poet

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~Fletch

about the sleeping, was that with or without chemical assistance?(aka pills like speed or something) I think I could beat that, that's what almost 3 days straight? yeah 2 days and 20 hours right? I've gone for about 50 before but never too much.

that last line is the wrong number of syllables isn't it? the "cease" isn't supposed to be there maybe?

I liked it =D

OK, to explain a little, here's a previous disscusion I had about this.

http://www.pinkfloydfan.net/t5757.html

Me and Botley went into some detail about how someone, with or without chemical assistance could do that. Enjoy.

We came to the conclusion that it's probably not a good idea.

Probably????
Yeah it wasn't in my best interest, but dammit that was one fun weekend!!!