new poem

I really don't know if anyone is going to like it, but what ever man!

Who are you?
I see you in my dream,
A glimps of light in the dark
I don't know who you are
Are you the one who can take me far and make me forget
With a touch can you make me perfect
When you hold me would I feel you
When you look at me will I know
I see you like a blind man see's hope
I hold you but I don't feel you
I hear you think when there's no on around

I like it. Kind of child-like, and I don't mean that in a bad way.

thanx! glade you liked it! XOXO

i would love a compliment from iluvatar, and it was nice had a overall good message