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| new poem Who are you? I see you in my dream, A glimps of light in the dark I don't know who you are Are you the one who can take me far and make me forget With a touch can you make me perfect When you hold me would I feel you When you look at me will I know I see you like a blind man see's hope I hold you but I don't feel you I hear you think when there's no on around |
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| I like it. Kind of child-like, and I don't mean that in a bad way. |
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| thanx! glade you liked it! XOXO |
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| i would love a compliment from iluvatar, and it was nice had a overall good message |
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