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10-06-2004, 04:09 PM
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| A Place Called... The Poem A Place Called...: The day is gray Let us lay around and ponder Some sounds rhythmic and comforts others wild and humbles Drift to another being Time is lost but reminds you "DING, DING" Straining to stand, roots are lifted stances bent in one direction The different sounds become one seperate twins re-united in this special place called.... Falsly trusted truths flicker is it worth it to bicker? The weak fall into oblivion Strong, weakened, let time mend thier strength will not end. The world rolls on in a diiferent way. The innocent & pure never cease to play. Which dream to fall next? Is one truer? One is surely Bluer. DING, DING Reasons are found When your feet don't touch the ground An Eye in the sky has an omnicent view This assumes to much the eye isn't empty Flicker, Bicker Are values right? Wrapped too tight? Gray is the day Gray is the night Attraction found in unlikely places do they even look at faces? Surronded by blood future shaken DING DING As it passes THe day is Bright The night dark Which one is truer? which one is bluer? Choices are made or flaot in the middle it wouldn't hurt to pick up a fiddle Judging if judgement matters Testing to see if it flatters Gray Here, Brigth above, Dark Beyond past that? past that? Leaving here to return inside, hope i have nothing to hide DIng, Ding, Ding, Ding, Ding , Ding, Ding, Ding Last edited by BreathingPink; 10-06-2004 at 05:11 PM.  |
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#2
10-06-2004, 04:20 PM
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| I thought it was mildly amusing at times, while angst ridden at others, all with a hint of sadness. I think one or two more "DING DINGS" and you'd have a winner |
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#3
10-06-2004, 04:37 PM
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| sooooooooooooooooo whats this all about? |
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#4
10-06-2004, 05:14 PM
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| well what is it about, i was bored thinking about my girlfriend and the world as i was confined to a gray dark room as hurricane jeanne passed over head, not really cohesive, haha, but neither am i. i was listening to animals by pink floyd also, really wanting some food. |
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#5
10-06-2004, 05:16 PM
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| i appreciate feed back, and you can name the place too, and mind you, KFC is horrible, at least in my town, service is non existent and so is brains... sorry to any kfc employees, being a member of this site excludes u from my judgement. |
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#7
10-16-2004, 10:30 PM
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| thanks rcmno, ur stuff is insightful to say the least |
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