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| Inspired by the Campaign season... I was inspired to jot this down.. it's a work in progress.. Middle of the Road It’s a lonely walk In the middle of the road It’s a lonely talk Down the middle of the road Dodging rocks thrown from the ditches In the middle of the road. Off the left shoulder Many gather in the weeds Clinging to hope and belief Their hearts still bleed. Meanwhile I stand alone In the middle of the road. Upon the righteous right People stand alone Gathering wealth and power To wield upon their throne I watch this from the centerline Alone in the Middle of the road. Our Mothers taught us all To play nice and get along To accept each other’s differences And try to right the wrongs But now we choose sides and battle The other side of the road. It breaks my heart to see What’s been happening to you and me. These tired old eyes Have seen too little compromise. Won’t you join me In the middle of the road. |
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| That's pretty good. The rhyming scheme is simple, but the words are big enough but don't have that "trying too hard" vibe. Good work. |
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| Just call me Robert Zimmerman.. |
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| Nah, I'm good with Dave Fulghum. |
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| That's great! I really like it. I guess the only criticism I have is that the term "righteous right" while it sounds clever, it also doesn't quite fit together in my mind, since it sounds like you're saying right twice. But whatever, it's still good! |
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| Good feedback, thanks Doc.. Like I said.. It's a work in progress... When It's all done I'll try to post all lyrics, chords and tab.. |
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| bump.... |
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#8
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| You and Chrissy Hynde Watch out for that big truck, Fulghers. |
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#9
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| There are far worse folks to be stuck in the middle with than Chrissy... Just don't tell my wife. |
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| Bump..... |
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| Spot on. |
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| Very nice. Good flow, appropriate words for the tone, nice rhyming scheme. Bravo, my good sir. |
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#13
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| Thank you very much MP. |
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