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| priorities Will my dollar divide Will I go on living Will I duck down and hide |
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#2
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| Another line and you'd almost have a limerick. |
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#3
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| Pretty good for a short one. I feel like it's a little incomplete though. The reason might be the fact that I nearly always write lengthy poems. Still good. Nice Job. |
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#4
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| I like it, it's short, simpmle, and to the point. |