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Old 12-24-2004, 08:42 PM
...we came in?
 
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Will my dollar multiply
Will my dollar divide
Will I go on living
Will I duck down and hide
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Old 12-24-2004, 08:43 PM
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Another line and you'd almost have a limerick.
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Old 03-03-2005, 08:27 PM
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Pretty good for a short one. I feel like it's a little incomplete though. The reason might be the fact that I nearly always write lengthy poems. Still good. Nice Job.
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Old 03-03-2005, 10:20 PM
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I like it, it's short, simpmle, and to the point.
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