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| tempest(the time one) always measuring always guaging never judging only watching never dancing only counting steps, taps and the occasional shuffle. tempest only looks never feels never complains seldom shouts mostly whispers little innuendo and secret little sighs. tempest behind real action suggests other courses perhaps the one's fear suppresses the hidden question unasked the tempest unmasked. tempest never revealed secret little fugitive hiding behind the curtain never to be seen never Last edited by seashell&stone; 12-31-2004 at 07:05 PM. |
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| Hey, glad to see you are post up your poems again! I like this one. It's well structured; a quick and easy read. At first it seemed a bit silly and nonsensical (perhaps it was your short lines), but by the time I finished I got a feel for what you were going at. Bravo! |
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| I like the feel it gives me in my mind. A little thought-provoking feel of awesomeness. Keep up the good work! ^__^ |
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