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| They had ignored me. I asked a question or made a comment and they'd stare; Like I was disgusting They laughed once, and I knew then, they should be dead like my logic Walking in the dark of my thoughts, I felt the coldness of their stares. Those who once ignored me now seemed to be intrigued. This feeling of fame sculpted a smile on my face. With the stares came voices. "Look at her", "What a ****en freak", "I know your secret." Their lips didn't move, but I heard the voices My head turned to see if they heard the voices, those voices in my head! The more they stared the louder their voices "Shut Up!" I said quietly. "Leave Me Alone!" I said louder. They stared to look at the freak. Some stop and stare with intensity. Their voices taunting my every movement. "SHUT UP, SHUT UP!" I yelled and screamed The voices stoped, and complete silence lingered. Hungry eyes fixated upon my confused body In the distance I heared an evil laugh echoing closer and closer to me. I looked around to see who's laughing! "WHO'S LAUGHING!", I yelled. I heared the voices again. "I'M NOT CRAZY!!!" I yelled, "SHUT UP!!" I ran away from the people murdering my sanity. I could still hear them. I ran to a church praying this wasn't hell, praying he'd forgive me. "I wasn't going to kill them!" I said. THE VOICES WOULDN'T STOP!! My own bullet turned against me. I took the gun out and BOOM! strait into my temple. The voices were gone.
__________________ Hey, why don't you..... Last edited by cindy1222 : 01-23-2005 at 09:16 PM. |
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) Wow. Very nicely conveyed. I like the brevity of it, but it still gets the point across. Brava.
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) i liked it |
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) It's a bit eh... gloomy and doomy.
__________________ It's a crime that the swift should be held back by the slow, and it's criminal that nothing is going to rectify it. |
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) very short, but very meaningful. Nice work!
__________________ The Lord is my shepherd. I shall not want He makes me down to lie. Through pastures green He leadeth me the silent waters by. With bright knives He releaseth my soul. He maketh me to hang on hooks in high places. He converteth me to lamb cutlets. For lo, He hath great power, and great hunger. When cometh the day we lowly ones, trough quiet reflection and great dedication, master the art of karate, lo, we shall rise up, and then we'll make the buggers eyes water |
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) Nice work.
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| Re: Schizophrenia (the voices are gone) Suicide,hmmm.
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