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Old 01-26-2005, 09:22 PM
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Another "inspired" poem

I reach my hand out
To take grasp of yours
To maybe pull you up
Out of that pit of dispair you've fallen into

Maybe you don't want my hand
That's okay
But just know
That I'll be there
Waiting for your grasp
When you're ready

Llowell



...cheesy, I know. This is just one of many...

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Old 01-26-2005, 09:31 PM
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i think its a good one. by the way, how have you been?
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Old 01-27-2005, 06:19 PM
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Thanks. I'm better...but I think this would be best discussed through PMs. I sent you one a while ago, but you didn't respond.
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Old 01-29-2005, 09:55 PM
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i really like your poem, it's good and thoughful! great job!!
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