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Old 02-21-2005, 09:33 PM
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My short story

I don't have it finished, but here's the general idea so far:

A girl named Jenny and her parents move to a town called Night Stroke in Louisiana (Fictional Location) where the people there aren't friendly with new comers. Jenny gets made fun of in school, and the teacher doesnt mind it. So, one day, she fll asleep in class, and dreamt of an event that she made up herself. Since she liked this, everyday, she fell asleep. But the teacher and the kids provoked her into waking up every time. So, her dreams were cut short. So, she takes sleeping pills so she couldnt wake up.

The title is : The Daydreamer

If you got a better one, post it. I will have the story up in a little bit.

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Old 02-21-2005, 09:36 PM
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no. I think its fine iv made some storys,non good thow. but isint that like that Twilit Zone when a man falls asleep in the train and his life sucks and the place hes at he likes so he keepes doing it and one time he didet agen and he was there forever becuse on the train the man died.

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Old 02-21-2005, 09:45 PM
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I'm sorry forum. I'll re-post it when it is copyrighted (you never know)

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Old 02-21-2005, 10:03 PM
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man your good at storys you shuld right a book on you short storys
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:04 PM
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thank you very much! I may get that one published along with The Daydreamer and another one I will write when i'm done with The Daydreamer. But was it somewhat similar to kill bill vol.1?

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Old 02-21-2005, 10:14 PM
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Talking

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(srry bout' gettin rid of the story)

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Old 02-21-2005, 10:19 PM
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Thats a good short story! I'm a writer as well, but I tend to write very long stories. Maybe someday I'll take a shot at the short story side of writing.
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:29 PM
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cant really write long stories, like James Patterson who can write that much. My ideas can be fully expressed in 10 or 12 pages.
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:43 PM
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Yeah that's cool, everyone has their own specialty.
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:47 PM
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I wanna read one of your stories Pinkswall
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:56 PM
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I wish I could type it all here but that would take way too much space. The best way I know to give you an idea of what it is like, is to say it's along the lines of Final Fantasy. However the character's don't cast spells or use magic directly but their is magic in the world nonetheless.
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Old 02-21-2005, 11:01 PM
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o nice. send your idea to Square-Enix and see if they will take it.
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Old 02-21-2005, 11:12 PM
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Oh I'm not quite done yet. I still have a long ways to go. Plus I'm a real critic when it comes to my work. I like to make it the best I can.
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Old 02-21-2005, 11:22 PM
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When you are finished send it in!
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Old 02-21-2005, 11:28 PM
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What will they do with it? Consider it for a game?
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