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Old 02-27-2005, 11:30 PM
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So, this is the latest thing I've come up with. It's the first of its kind for a while. Anyway, the inspiration behind it is something I think we can all relate to. You ever break up with someone after like a three weeks, and you never even got that close, and they try to stick you with all that bulls*** baggage? Well, this is for that person. The borrowed Zeppelin lyrics are cuz she loved that song.

Living the high life,
Even when it's low.
Red and green don't dictate
When people stop and go.
So now I'm waiting
For signals to change.
I ask if it was stupid,
Was it wrong to kill the pain?

When I was younger
I played the game.
And when I bled,
I'd cry.
When I'm old
Will I still feel the same?
Will I just lay down
My guns and die?

Was it wrong?
Sould I have played along?
How many more cliches to fix
This stupid f***ing love song?

Lot's of people talking,
Few of them know,
Soul of a woman
Did not come from below.
Sweet little baby,
Say what you will,
My eyes are open.
I'll see you in hell.

Don't get the message wrong,
I don't think you're to blame.
A few more shots,
I won't remember your name.
Someday I'll wonder,
What happened way back when?
If life don't kill me first,
Or maybe that's the plan.

Was I wrong?
Did I not play along?
Can you stop crying long enough to hear
This stupid f***ing love song?
Should I cry?
Why did I lie?
Would it make you feel much better
If I lay down and die?
But, I'm not wrong.
And now I'm gone.
But it's okay because I wrote for you
This stupid f***ing love song.
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Old 02-27-2005, 11:36 PM
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I like that. Sounds like it could be a very rocking tune, if put to music.
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Old 02-27-2005, 11:38 PM
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It is. I think it's the first song I've writen that doesn't suck in a long time. So for that, if nothing else, I thank her.
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Old 02-28-2005, 04:58 PM
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damn that would be one hell of a rockin song. Nice job!
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Old 02-28-2005, 07:19 PM
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Would be nice put to music.
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Old 02-28-2005, 08:11 PM
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Those are pretty good lyrics, nice job!
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Old 02-28-2005, 10:48 PM
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Thank you all. And like I said, it does have music. Hopefully someday you'll hear it.
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