A new one..

Fingers.

The sun
Shines
While days
Grind
All the while
Time
Slips through your fingers.

The Moon
Beams
While nights
Steam
All the while
Dreams
Slip through your fingers.

I like that one pretty good.
Did you write it?

Yeah.. I just did.. It just rolled off my fingers.. I couldn't stop it..

You should definatly sell that one to hallmark and never have to work again.

I have never wrote one before but here it is:

Live the life.
Sharpen the knife.
The american dream.
Join the team.
Happy people.
In the neighborhood.
I think you should.
Live the life.

Take the knife.
Cut the dream.
Quit the team.
Destroy the people.
In the neighborhood.
I think you should.
Grasp the life.

Dude.. start your own thread..

oops sorry.
i will delete it if you want.

Nah.. it's OK.

Both are pretty good, you should put yours to music Fulghy!

I probably will... I hear it as more of a jazz piece..

Hey, nice poem Fulghy.

Thankyee kindly...

Awesome stuff, I like it alot. I like your style.

Why thank you very much.. I enjoy reading your assessments of the poetry on here, and I apperciate your candor. That means a lot.

Too bad midnight pulse wasn't talking about my poem.

I was thinking the same thing.