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| Novice By: Maurice J. Irvin Yesterday, I saw a squirrel; He was dangling from a tree. And try to hang on as he might, The Wind still pulled him free. Today, though I saw in my path The same tree from yesterday, There now sat atop it a crow, Which the Wind could not sway. I wept then and there, Despite that marvelous tree, For I realized the squirrel was what I was But the crow, what I could be. Last edited by Wing'd Icarus; 03-05-2005 at 10:39 AM. |
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| EXCELLENT..... Marvelous work.. |
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#3
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| I agree, it might be the best i've seen around here yet. |
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#4
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| Ogden Nashworthy, for sure. |
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#5
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| Wow, that's amazing. |
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#6
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| To avoid repeating anyone else, I will say that it is inspiring and beautiful. My hat is off to you, Ikky. |
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#7
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| thanks. |
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#8
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| Hey, I like that. |
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#9
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| Wow, I had to go back and check the name on that! I thought you were posting a poem you liked. Great work! |
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#10
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| Moving. Wonderful. Great. And all those other lovely things everyone else said still apply. Bravo. Good show. Keep up the good work. |