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Old 03-05-2005, 07:38 PM
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Two days old
Wrote this one a couple of nights ago...enjoy.

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Weariness overcomes me
Sleepiness fills my eyes
This drowsiness flows in my veins

But I do not want to sleep
Not yet
I'd rather wait
For You
Just for you

But I have waited long
My eyelids droop at my fatigue
I don't know how much longer I can wait

Your hesitation is wearing me out

-Llowell
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Old 03-05-2005, 08:39 PM
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The drowsiness flows in my veins Hmm... reminds me of this afternoon.

I like it, Llowey.
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Old 03-05-2005, 08:40 PM
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its good, but a little emo
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Old 03-05-2005, 09:23 PM
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Isn't that a bird?
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Old 03-05-2005, 09:25 PM
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Brock, that's 'emu' not 'emo'.
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Old 03-05-2005, 09:44 PM
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Thanks for screwing up my thread guys. Thanks.
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Old 03-05-2005, 09:46 PM
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You're welcome.
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Old 03-05-2005, 10:03 PM
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Re: Two days old
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Originally posted by one_of_my_turns

Weariness overcomes me
Sleepiness fills my eyes
This drowsiness flows in my veins

But I do not want to sleep
Not yet
I'd rather wait
For You
Just for you

But I have waited long
My eyelids droop at my fatigue
I don't know how much longer I can wait

Your hesitation is wearing me out
Good one Llowell. If i didn't know better, I'd say you wrote that while waiting for your wife to choose which outfit to wear.
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Old 03-05-2005, 10:07 PM
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I pick out my outfits quite quickly, thanks .
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Old 03-05-2005, 10:09 PM
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Maybe NOW, but just wait until you have a husband you can torment.
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Old 03-05-2005, 10:12 PM
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Thanks for screwing up my thread guys. Thanks.
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Old 03-05-2005, 10:22 PM
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it was all stratman..
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Old 03-06-2005, 12:24 AM
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I liked that poem. That's how I feel everyday when I'm at school.
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