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Old 12-21-2001, 02:05 AM
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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

Us...and them...
And after all, the world's a place we've never been
Me...and you...
From far away, it doesn't seem to be so true

Forward he cried
From the fear
Of the rising tide
And the Enemy sat
While the bars on his cap
Found no place to hide

Black...and blue...
There's nothing here that we can look backward to
Up...and down...
And if we fall, the voice will circle round and round

"Haven't you heard?!
It's a battle of words!"
The honor-seeker cried
"Listen son," said the man on the run,
"The barren field survived."

Ya, we're really gonna kill ya...a quick, short, sharp, shock, that ought to give it the gain...you ain't got nothing but a fraction...I mean good manners don't cost nothing, do they?

Down...and out...
It can't be helped, but there is not enough to clout
With...without...
And who'll deny it's why the Father has to shout?

Out of the way,
It's a terrible day,
I've got more proof to find
For want of the price
To live and day twice
The reason died.
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I re-wrote the entire "Dark Side of the Moon" album, but this was the best of my re-writing. This, "Money", and "Breathe," all of which I will post later on.

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Old 12-21-2001, 02:10 AM
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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

What was your reason for re-writing this one? I guess if it was anything to do with religion you can't answer me
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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

No reason. Just wanted to do something creative with my spare time.
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Old 12-21-2001, 03:36 AM
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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

"Breathe"

Breathe, breathe if you dare
You'll know just when and where
Leave, but don't be free
Look around, and lay yourself down
For long you live and hard you cry
And smiles you'll give, no reason why
And all you touch and all you see
Is all your sense will ever need

Run, soldier, run
Hope no more, you're on the run
And when the welcome home is done,
Don't dare sigh, it's time to fire another gun
For long you live, and high you fly
But only if you can abide
And while you've just begun to rave,
Beneath the moon, you'll dig your grave.

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Re: Alternate Lyrics: "Dark Side of the Moon" (select)

Actually I quite like a few of those changes.
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Why thank you.
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not too bad.
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Well, they're not bad at all, I agree with Twatty.

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They are good, almost as good I could do



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