Mmm....tastes bitter

Wrote this one earlier this month, was somewhat disgusted with it and put it away, but recently I took it back out, decided it was somewhat relevant, reworked it a bit, and here it is. It's not that great, but I feel like sharing it, so enjoy.

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Thank you
Thank you for all of the friendship you never returned

I appreciate it
No, really, I do
It shows how important I really am to you

To me-
You were the bright smile that made my day
To you-
I'm the guy who says "hello" as we pass

I guess I expected too much
Expecting...Love--
I should've known it was too good to be true.

-Llowell

Thats good I like it

Aww, Lo, that is really good. I know you're going through alot of stuff right now, just hang in there, 'kay?

I've felt that way, it sucks too.

Wonderfully written. It hits a personal note with me. I had written a poem similar to that, so I know where you're coming from. If you are hitting a hard point in life, just keep the things that are good and mean something to you (like the Pink Floyd of course ^_^) close at hand for when you need comfort.