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Old 03-26-2005, 01:59 PM
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A new one

Here's a new one. I wrote it late last night...it's the first I've written in a while. I know, I know, these are getting redundant. Get over it.

Oh, also wanted to thank you guys for your kind comments on my other poems. Thanks!
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You hide
You duck
You dodge me

I don't know what it's about
But I don't like it
It makes me miss you
And I do
With all my being

I keep trying
Trying to reach you
But you won't allow it
Fine
But just know I'm not about to give in
This friendship means too much to me
I just wished it meant something to you.

-Llowell
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Old 03-26-2005, 02:32 PM
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UH oh... somebody got a broken heart..

Nice verse..
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Old 03-26-2005, 03:00 PM
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It just sounds like you're talking to someone.
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Old 03-26-2005, 03:01 PM
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Sound aight I suppose.

I would post some of mine....but I'm afraid of someone else taking it.

I mean come on, no one really knows if Dylan visits this site or not.


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Old 03-26-2005, 03:01 PM
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I guess it's better than oinking that them, huh?
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Old 03-26-2005, 03:07 PM
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It just sounds like you're talking to someone.
That's kind of the point. But to each their own.
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Old 03-26-2005, 03:35 PM
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It just sounds like you're talking to someone.
If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.


Sad, sweet, and simple. I know you're hurting, Lo, just hang in there.
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Old 03-26-2005, 07:10 PM
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If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.
That's the worst advice ever.
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