Poem #666

Man have i missed alot sense the last time i was on WOAAAH. any way here is what i think the most darkest poem i have ever wrote. it has no title so just read.

sweep away the tears
redness is your only fear
running away not to run
just to get away from the fun

blood runs down your face
your viens twist until they're laced
into a bloody know of grace
what have they done to our feelings?
what have they done to our well being?
hit her and did her
stuck her with knifes and mate no facers
bloody hells are nothing to worry
you should wish to go if you're lucky
there are worse things than the denying of love
like the bleeding hearts and bloody dove
that flies and dies until you can't take it
your black heart seeps through your eyelids
nothing to worry because you think you're pure
knowing all that has been is just you and a dirty whore
nover to kill your father
never to f**k your mother
never to hear the scream of the butterfly
because tonight you are to die

-Skylar

*low whistle* wow

is that a good thing or a bad thing??

I agree

Very good, I say. Nice wording and clever rhymes, wonderfully dark.

Thanks!!