Poem called _______(insert title here)

i need to get a title for this poem but i can't figure it out so i was hoping that you guys could help me. so here it is

inside you come
but only to get out you hope your the some
easy in no way out
nothing can get out not even my shout
you will never leave
once you take the passage through my souls sleeve
i can't let out the thing inside
i can just say i need to fly not cry
but wait, she comes along, a new girl in town
says she feels so free when i am around
she makes me feel like i am needed when i'm down
but just as before it's gone and she says nothing at all
she watchs me go to my fall
but before i do a new girl comes along
makes me feel strong
we together put it to our tounge
laughing loud with purple haze in our lung
the smell blows through the empty breeze
selitifying your soul and mind feel free
whisper in my ear oh so sweet one
hold me so soflty and you have won
kiss me tease me touch me please me
untill it is done
the sweet one
the tasty one
the moonlight sun
oh what fun

-skylar
i know it sucks but i need a title to fix it up a bit so help.

What is the some?

Meh. It's alright, not as good as your other recent poem. Titles are a bitch, I can never think of any either.

People able to escape from the entrapment

i think i have made this into something better!!! here it is......


inside the invisible tears there lurks a soulless man
come along and give me your hand
it may apear that it is alright
but if you could look inside you will only find night
it may be cold it may be strange
but i can never leave the rage

look beyond the sky
and see why i so wish to fly
leave the rest of the world behind
searching not to find
just to trying to let you see the flame
that gratefully needs your game
to feel the fire that keeps the eyes blue
thinking i will lie to you

look into the windows of my soul
they are bloodshot red burning of coal
there is no white behind the sky
just vast darkness that will not pass
it is a blackhole that will never give in
can't let out even to sin

look into the fire
it pulls you strong and becomes your desire
and now stare into the fire and see the water glee
it may be strapped but it still flows free
inside the souless man

-skylar

as you can see i totally redid the poem........hope you guys like it!

and your opinion on the new poem is...........

I like the second poem better...

Looking Beyond

How's that for a title?

Thanks, I agree with you too. I personally don't like either though. That title is a good one too.... I think I'll use it! Thanks again.

Hmmmm well..........after reading the first one ....."Mystified reason" comes to mind for a name, don't know why, but it fits in my mind, anyway.