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Old 06-04-2005, 09:33 PM
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It's been a while...

Its been a long time since i have been on the site, i thought i would start back with a random poem. heres goes...

The light shines through the faded walls,
The darkness screams through the broken glass,
Then somewhere, a voice calls...
Then footprints in the grass.

A forgotten melody hovers in the air,
A tune once played by the best,
Left alone without a care,
Just like all his rest.

The sky is dark, the rain will fall,
To drown the forgotten song,
Then Mercy he does call,
And he will for very long.

I feel in a way, this song represents Syd Barrett, and him being deserted by the band. This came off the top of my head, tell me what you think!
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that's heaps good!! I like it very much. Nice work.

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NICE!! that is very organized to the sight and the ear when said out loud........I like it!
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Thanks guys, im glad you liked it. My internet is currently down, so im using my friends computer, im not sure when ill be able to post again. Hopefully it will be soon!
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