The Poem

i got inspired by the pic that ObscuredAnimals posted in his/her thread. here it goes......

looking through the cracks of the night sky
nothing more peaceful than the star light of hell to reply
the anger is no where to be seen but just to be known
as you watch you realize that the star seems to have grown
but you fell nothing..no fear...no joy....no emotion
the faded moon is not the potion
it is the poison in your veins
even though that poison is hardly visible you can see it through many plains
it will kill you but you can't help the sight
you can feel the fight

looking through the day night
you know that it isn't right
the pull is strong as it grows into you eyes with passion
running from the potion
that just may save the happy joy inside
but in repitions of pain everything collides
an eruption of emotion that no one could for see
everything unleshed to everyone who thought they were free

looking at the distruction of the sight
you fell no need to make a flight
to the bright and homely warmth
you have an urge to take more looks of the distructions grussum
as the flames rise to say
Welcome to the Dark Side Of The Sun and Moon

-Skylar
haven't reread it so i hope it is good (think it is better to leave everything in the moment)

Thats really cool. I'm glad you found inspiration in my work. Beautiful poem.

very good, Young Master Skylicker.

thanks! i think it could have been better but in the moment things turn out different. and sometimes it is good sometimes it is bad and sometimes it is neither