On my spare time

well in the past month i've written very little poems... and i thought id share these poems.....

Mirror

Looking in a windowless hole
There is no telling what is gold

All i see is an entity
Maybe this will set me free

It has no emotions
It's just a grane of sand in the comotion

He will never leave
He will never again diceave

This is just a dream
Nothing more.....but a dream

It looks trapped
But I can't save it from his relapse

He goes unseen through the catasrovy
Like a little bug or bumble bee

It is just an empty space in time
The truth will never unwined

Look at it closer....see the mind
It is twisted and torn from behind

The pleseant thoughts are over runned by diseet
And the feelings and concern are so discreet
That one might think they are pure
But all of this is unsure

Gazing further into this surinity
I see disrtuction in its eyes

And as I look at this enitity
I realize.....it is me.......

~Skylar





Pain and Pleasure

Bewildered by love
Gazing and the dove
Juice red sqeezes on this deck
As your halo floats down your neck
Become fallen off the cloud
See it grow and hit the ground
So pleasured to be around

Confused with guilt
Glancing at what you have built
Nailed upon the grass we go
leveling our grave so we may not be cold
Eating away at our sirinity
Just feel it come and go like an entity
All just makes me so happy

Pain and pleasure
Its all the same just like the weather
No need for joy just room for rain
No need for fright all there is is pain
Run with me to the sea
Fly away across and be free


Pain and pleasure
It will stay the same for ever
Leaving us only what we find
And see it all just rewind
Now lets crawl to our grave
And swim away to our cave


Bracing the desire
Feel the heat of the healing fire
Crave the distant ground
While being tugged off your cloud
Twirl around untill your nailed
Come closer but do not bail
Completely amazed by the scale

Despise the joy
Hate controls this boy
Spinning around upon the grass
Pleasure can never last
Pulling yourself from the gods
As not to see any thing clog
Feeling so free upon this log

~Skylar

yup .... only two..

I like those.

Yoo that mirror was awesome we read it while Shine on you crazy diamond was on.

Although you need to work on your spelling, Sky.

pfft.. i have no clue what your talking about.. i can spell just fine

dude, those have to be the best poems i've ever read in this forum. very insightful. nice work!

Very morbid! But that may be because I read them while listening to See Saw lol.

I like em. For the Mirror one, I am not too for the bumble bee part, but its your own opinion man.

Keep it up!