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| My Song: "The Death Sequence" Evaluate it please Any opinions, suggestion, or corrections to my bad spelling are more than welcomed. Later I'll compose the music. "The Death Sequence" by Juan Carlos Garcia M. I’ve seen you, and you’ve seen me We’re both part of this mystery Do you think all happens for a reason? Does it matter what’s the season? Not everyone has the chance to live But all will someday die Doesn’t matter how hard you try Don’t know when, we are gonna leave Moments come and go Memories stay, but not for long Life is short, we must keep on There’s maybe something else waiting for us I don’t know what’s really the truth No more science, or anything religious Money may worth something to us But its just all momentary Beyond the hills, beneath the sky Behind the trees, I can hear you cry Where does everything will go? Don’t know what’s going on Anyway, we belong to a death sequence The tears you cry, the smiles you laugh The songs you write, the friends you make The miles you walk, the balls you kick Maybe will not worth a bit; that makes me sick Fighting against mortality Many have drown themselves into insanity Sadness, worry, anger and wars Can happen in Earth, the Moon, and even in Mars Where the hell we all come from? Which place can I consider home? Everyone is just becoming afraid Of knowing what waits for humans Where does everything starts? Why are we here? What is the cause? The community is ready to hear What is the meaning of it all? Surrounded by questions that make a wall Everybody needs some answers We are just getting instructions Love and hate, it’s desperate It soon will be too late Everything, at the correct moment Suddenly come to an end Anyway, we belong to a death sequence The fact you actually heard my words Makes me feel like I’m in a bright, new world* Just in front of my eyes My life will just pass by *this is 2 lines are dedicated to a very good girl friend that actually listened to me when i was a kinda depressed because of the main subject of my song |
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| Re: My Song: "The Death Sequence" Evaluate it please Great job, you have a very unique writing style |
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| Re: My Song: "The Death Sequence" Evaluate it please Thanks, good to hear that!!! |
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