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Old 08-13-2005, 12:22 AM
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My Song: "The Death Sequence" Evaluate it please

I've written a song about a very dark, mysterious and concerning (at least to me) theme: death. As many other people, I'm kinda scared and have a lot of doubts. The name I took it from the first name given to "Great GiG in the Sky".
Any opinions, suggestion, or corrections to my bad spelling are more than welcomed. Later I'll compose the music.


"The Death Sequence" by Juan Carlos Garcia M.

I’ve seen you, and you’ve seen me
We’re both part of this mystery
Do you think all happens for a reason?
Does it matter what’s the season?

Not everyone has the chance to live
But all will someday die
Doesn’t matter how hard you try
Don’t know when, we are gonna leave

Moments come and go
Memories stay, but not for long
Life is short, we must keep on
There’s maybe something else waiting for us

I don’t know what’s really the truth
No more science, or anything religious
Money may worth something to us
But its just all momentary

Beyond the hills, beneath the sky
Behind the trees, I can hear you cry
Where does everything will go?
Don’t know what’s going on

Anyway, we belong to a death sequence

The tears you cry, the smiles you laugh
The songs you write, the friends you make
The miles you walk, the balls you kick
Maybe will not worth a bit; that makes me sick

Fighting against mortality
Many have drown themselves into insanity
Sadness, worry, anger and wars
Can happen in Earth, the Moon, and even in Mars

Where the hell we all come from?
Which place can I consider home?
Everyone is just becoming afraid
Of knowing what waits for humans

Where does everything starts?
Why are we here?
What is the cause?
The community is ready to hear

What is the meaning of it all?
Surrounded by questions that make a wall
Everybody needs some answers
We are just getting instructions

Love and hate, it’s desperate
It soon will be too late
Everything, at the correct moment
Suddenly come to an end

Anyway, we belong to a death sequence

The fact you actually heard my words
Makes me feel like I’m in a bright, new world*
Just in front of my eyes
My life will just pass by


*this is 2 lines are dedicated to a very good girl friend that actually listened to me when i was a kinda depressed because of the main subject of my song
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Great job, you have a very unique writing style .
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Thanks, good to hear that!!!
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