Pastimes

Well I've been at my hobby again. hope you guys like it.

Angel

Falling down with integraty
Filling up with so much desire
Pilling high as not to hurt
But pain came to soon

Sickness grows as I wonder no
Deep feelings tell me to go
But I must find out
I need to know

I turn with a new understanding
That maybe it was never to know
But I'm not sure to give up
'Cause all I get is.....







Thinking of you
Looking at you
Wanting to be with you
But not getting you

So I look at my reflection
In the scuffed up window
That once held a sign
That now lays crumbled on the floor

Give me an opening
To the eyes I see before
'Cause how long I wanted to gaze
Into your soul window

Wishing of no name
Hoping for a better day
That will bring me to life
Bring me to you

Prying my third eye open
Just to glance at you walk by
As not to fall
I see you fly

~skylar

I seriously like it.

I am going to use those words on one of my songs. I hope you don't mind if I claim ownership of the poem...

















Im just messing with you. I would never steal intellectual property.
Cheers

Well I got another........ It's called Lost Words

I'll protect you from your enemies
I'll protect you from all your deepest fears
I'll kill the ones who lied
I'll kill the people who hurt
I'll surrender to you
I'll surrender to your kiss

Lost words, Lost love birds
Wondering in an epic world
Of hate, lies, that make people die
Surrendering to lust

I'll protect you from your friends
I'll protect you from your goals
I'll kill those who walk
I'll kill the ones who talk
I'll surrender to this lust
I'll surrender to your touch

Lost words, Lost love birds
Running from the world
That grips every little boy and girl
Who don't surrender to lust

~Skylar

Running Water

I killed myself today
To see if anybody would care
I spoke out to you
The only one I need

The taste makes a face
The only thing I know
Tried to drain it all away
But it keeps coming back everyday

What have I become
My precious friend
Every thing I told
Will last in the end

And I have let you down
I have torn it a part
Everything I knew
Has gone down the drain

I sit and stare at you
Like it was a priceless pearl
Full of wanting thoughts
That just can't be satisfied

You are what I need
And I am what makes it hurt
You made a plug
And I made the drain

What have I become
My precious friend
Everything I knew
Has gone down the drain

And I have let you down
I have torn it a part
Everything I knew
Has gone down the drain

Please believe me
I have not seen
What I'm saying to you
Your thoughts are so pure

I created all of this
Like it was a fire
I lead it spread
Untill there was no more fire

What have I become
My precious friend
Everything I knew
Has gone down the drain

And I have let you down
I have torn it a part
Everything I knew
Has gone down the drain






© Skylar Brickman

I only read the first one and I like it! It flows very well without having a distinct rhythm in rhyming. The words fit together well.

"Hurt"

Yeah I was just rewording it to fit me:p haha. It was my first time doing that

Well I made a site for my poems... if you're intrested come read them.

The Path Is Set

This trail is silenced with the town
From the bodies you left lying on the ground
Scattered from dismemberment all around
Broken pieces of glass now bound
To your arms as you take another
While you relapse back into a slumber
Unknown to the queue messenger
That taps beneath the cellur floor
Waiting for a reply at the door
While the benumbing becomes more
Only to find in bed a dead whore


~Skylar