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Old 02-08-2006, 05:54 AM
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Shorelines & Their Erosion

A little dark, but I have to balance the light somehow

Shorelines & Their Erosion

Though still the waters are,
The shoreline seems so very far
So many remnants of fallen stars
Sear into my skin like scars

Twist away from the light
Crave the darkness in my eyes
Feel the burden of my heart
Burn you like a wall of fire
Pull away from all you know
Envelop all that pains you so
Feel the passion in my soul
Crush your dreams and take control

Atop the many diverted streams,
As sunlight dims and moonlight gleams,
So many remnants of wasted dreams
Tear my life apart at the seams

Twist towards the pain
Crave the urge to feel again
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Old 02-08-2006, 08:52 AM
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Re: Shorelines & Their Erosion

That's a bit depressing. But it's nice, nonetheless.

Congrats, and post some more good stuff!

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Old 02-08-2006, 10:49 AM
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Re: Shorelines & Their Erosion

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Originally Posted by Sinistas
A little dark, but I have to balance the light somehow

Shorelines & Their Erosion

Though still the waters are,
The shoreline seems so very far
So many remnants of fallen stars
Sear into my skin like scars

Twist away from the light
Crave the darkness in my eyes
Feel the burden of my heart
Burn you like a wall of fire
Pull away from all you know
Envelop all that pains you so
Feel the passion in my soul
Crush your dreams and take control

Atop the many diverted streams,
As sunlight dims and moonlight gleams,
So many remnants of wasted dreams
Tear my life apart at the seams

Twist towards the pain
Crave the urge to feel again
Last line is great !!!!
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Twist towards the pain
Crave the urge to feel again
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Old 02-08-2006, 11:25 AM
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Re: Shorelines & Their Erosion

Thanks. It's about my tendency to be miserable from time to time in order to right myself.
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Old 02-09-2006, 01:54 AM
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Re: Shorelines & Their Erosion

I dont think so; i feel you have poured all your naked feelings in that .
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