Hey Mr. Barrett I Wrote You Another Song...

here it is "Together To The Sky":
(if you like it dont steal it, if you dont then i dont care)


You left us once before
Quite younger I know
Those were shining times
When you were around

You used to come and go
You were never really sure
But since you got on board
You were always “Comodore”

Chorus:
Can’t you see all you mean to me?
Won’t you stay, with Emily we’ll play
Take my hand, could you join my band?
And maybe we could fly, together to the sky

What were you thinking of
When you flew way to up
Then you likely touch floor
And blew from your front door

But now days are odd
We’re in the bottom of sea
Should we accept or nod
Since you left us Syd

That sounds nice
But you posted it twice
And that's so... dice

no man, aint posted twice... They are 2 DIFFERENT songs

Come on, it was the same a minute ago.

yeah i now man but it was an accident tryin to put the second one and i made a duplicate....

but now there are 2 songs to syd.. i really was devasteted so the second was the first i made and took me long time... although its not great quality but i really love the chorus..

Noy only the chorus, but the whole thing sounds very nice.

thanks man... well its almost 5 a.m. here in mexico i think enough of composing for today... well not today but until sun jumps again

Very nice! I really needed a lyric for my song!

< you should have used these